Sunday, October 10, 2010
In media res
"Only you know how to be an idiot. So as to get our airplane tickets mixed up, and have us land in the Netherlands." Screamed Johnny to his brother Josh. Josh stood dumb founded as he held his map of Paris in utter disbelief. "We were suppost to land in Paris" said Josh to himself. But in his competative quest to be a dominate older brother said. "Shut up." It was just him and his brother in the airport. They had come off a red eye and were stuck with no where to go. They had managed to get themselvs lost in the biggest snow storm to ever hit the country. It sucked and so he looked at his brother. He wanted to cry and tear but he held up. He took out his phone and after dailing a few numbers. Got to the number he wanted. "Ummm Hi mom and dad. Yeah were lost and were about half a hundred miles away from home."
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This is great....you definitely start in the middle of the action....I love the intentions between the characters and how you can tell that Josh knows that he makes mistakes, but he's going to always say he's right, anyway.
ReplyDeleteAgain, there are a few grammatical errors....make sure to have your peers check your work before you post.
9/10