Journal 5 Six sentence fiction
They were both nervous.It was there first time doing this. Everyone said "it would be scary on there first try." He took a deep breath and asked her. "Are you ready ?" As they entered the quick spinning roller coaster.
Nice work! I love the last sentence....your piece leads us to believe one thing and then you switch our perspective. In the 2nd sentence it is "their", not "there".
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